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	<title>Comments on: Why don&#8217;t newspaper journalists get to the point?</title>
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		<title>By: Simon</title>
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		<dc:creator>Simon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Feb 2010 18:24:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s true, but then there&#039;s an awful lot of business writing which leaves a lot to be desired.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s true, but then there&#8217;s an awful lot of business writing which leaves a lot to be desired.</p>
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		<title>By: Simon</title>
		<link>http://writemindset.com/journalism/154/newspaper-journalists-get-to-the-point.html/comment-page-1#comment-242</link>
		<dc:creator>Simon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Feb 2010 18:23:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, I would agree. I think the newspapers, some at least, are starting to look really old fashioned because of their writing style.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, I would agree. I think the newspapers, some at least, are starting to look really old fashioned because of their writing style.</p>
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		<title>By: executive coaching</title>
		<link>http://writemindset.com/journalism/154/newspaper-journalists-get-to-the-point.html/comment-page-1#comment-219</link>
		<dc:creator>executive coaching</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Jan 2010 10:10:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I totally agree - journalists seem to feel the need through poetic licence to use ten words where two would do the trick. 
In my experience in writing copy for blogs where readable screen space is restricted just like the newspaper columns, it is essential to bring the benefits or key point of the article to the forefront of the piece to at least engage with the audience. Then it is key to keep to the point as clearly as possible. Would anyone agree?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I totally agree &#8211; journalists seem to feel the need through poetic licence to use ten words where two would do the trick.<br />
In my experience in writing copy for blogs where readable screen space is restricted just like the newspaper columns, it is essential to bring the benefits or key point of the article to the forefront of the piece to at least engage with the audience. Then it is key to keep to the point as clearly as possible. Would anyone agree?</p>
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		<title>By: executive coaching</title>
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		<dc:creator>executive coaching</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Jan 2010 09:35:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I totally agree, and it is really frustrating. They seem to generate poetically licensed  copy using ten words where two would do the trick. If nothing else, more trees could be saved in the process of &quot;getting to the point&quot;! 
In my experience of how to write copy for the web it is essential to get to the point and bring the key benefits of reading the page to the forefront.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I totally agree, and it is really frustrating. They seem to generate poetically licensed  copy using ten words where two would do the trick. If nothing else, more trees could be saved in the process of &#8220;getting to the point&#8221;!<br />
In my experience of how to write copy for the web it is essential to get to the point and bring the key benefits of reading the page to the forefront.</p>
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		<title>By: seo packages</title>
		<link>http://writemindset.com/journalism/154/newspaper-journalists-get-to-the-point.html/comment-page-1#comment-217</link>
		<dc:creator>seo packages</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Jan 2010 09:30:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>its not just journo&#039;s. Take a look at business letters as well .
Lyndon</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>its not just journo&#8217;s. Take a look at business letters as well .<br />
Lyndon</p>
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